Reading Notes part B: The Ghost of Ajax



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Ajax
Odyssey: The Ghost of Ajax Story source: Homer's Odyssey, translated into English by Tony Kline. 2014.

     This story starts off slow and there is little going on as far as plot development. I think that what I will change about this story is starting off the story with a major event or pivotal scene where the antagonist meets the agonist. I will provide a better background for the character of Ajax. This story has inspired me to change the character role of Ajax from a man, to the cleaning agent. I will keep a similar plot line, but portray the story from the perspective of Ajax Bleach where the antagonists are strains. It will be the ghost of Ajax, but with just a slight alteration that I believe will help to create a comical story line for many to read. The story will show Ajax seeing ghosts of other popular cleaning agents, similarly to when Ajax see's the ghosts of fallen warriors.
     I believe that these additions to the story will make it much more enjoyable to read. I will do my best to maintain the same, bleak tone of the story, but while at the same time making it ironic and humerus. I believe that this story has many aspects that will aid me in my future story writing. I enjoyed reading this story, it gave off a mysterious tone that enthralled me and kept me reading even though the content was rather dry. I would like to create a story that is intriguing and at the same time, a good read.


Image Source: Drugstore.com. Walgreens. Web. 14 Jan. 2014. Ajax Bleach

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